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ice
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0 posted 2011-05-16 06:29 AM


    

( Working and praying in my own personal garden on the equinox--March 20, 2011)

On the earth, I genuflect
As do all of natures pious,
When beads of warm rain
Wet skin on bare arms
Still white from winter.
.
All the buds, the greening-pretty ones
Praise the same, nodding on the altar
Where I kneel - rise, and spin the wheel
Of prayers today, that sends out
Universal praise with special thanks
To a higher sun--for warm returning.
.
I leave an offering by nurturing, work
At cutting away, the dead by frozen
While the tilted earth takes broader steps
Allowing light to gain to almost won;
Confirming my faith in Chrysanthemums,
And the saffron that hides in viola buds.
.
Touching their leaves, I feel the pulse
Of  johnny-jump-up color; my fingertips
Sense purple-saffron, yellow, and black-
Dots that paint smiles on white faces;
.
To see what is believed
By only touch,
Is treasure found
By only those, who sight
Through rainbow dreamer eyes.
.
Again enraptured by the day,
The time, the place
I kneel, and pray my mantra:
.
"Come into me,
My dear sweet earth,
Penetrate my being-
Mind , my body bent
On the pivot-equinox;
Say my heart
The ancient poems
Of your great bounty-
Knowing these things
Don't come free-
I gladly pay with aches
In tasks,
Your benefits to reap."
.
Amen

© 2011 ford hume

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-16 08:50 AM


Amen, Amen!

After reading and praying with you here I feel in a meditative state, appreciative of every word you used to convey the closeness/oneness with all of life and in such special way with the plants that Mother Earth bestows you with.

You succeeded in eliciting an exquisite tune with this enthralling poem.

Love,
Margherita

ice
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2 posted 2011-05-17 05:09 AM


Margherita
The plants are truly a gift to me from nature. I love to experience their resurection each spring when the stone is rolled away from the cave of winter to let out the hope of spring..

As it emerges it spins the prayer wheel,which releases uncountable flowers (prayers) into the universe. Truly we are all blessed by that.
Thank you for the reply
Namste
ford

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3 posted 2011-05-17 10:39 AM


It takes a gift to care for a gift...
which you do, very well, sir.




Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-05-17 10:59 AM


mellow and soothing kind of kewl amigo!!  enjoyed it
Martie
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5 posted 2011-05-17 01:27 PM


Ford...Appreciation flows in circles, tended by the loving hand, it warms in many ways...as does this poem.
ice
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6 posted 2011-05-17 08:50 PM


Sunshine
What a wonderful reply...thank you
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Dark
I like the word "soothing" in a poem reply....thanks
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Martie
Yup, it is a circle game, appreciation is spherical, never lineal.

Thanks for the reply

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2011-05-17 09:30 PM


I keep reading your poem, feeling the blossom of life and thinking, "as in heaven so on earth" when we are cognizant of renewal and vitality in the beauty bequeathed us here.  I was warmed in the reading... it's lovely, joyful,  and inherent as breathing.  ~Karen
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