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Paradise1
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since 2006-06-23
Posts 15
Illinois, United States

0 posted 2011-05-15 02:59 PM


The day to day troubles my mind
That it took so long for me to,
Grasp the concept of true love,
I was so infuriated with what was left of my disguise
Tried to play that fake love game
But I got exposed
Allowed my representative be visible
While the real me was creeping in its mere shadows
You knew that,
Cause you were watching me.
And I'm sorry....
That I set a bomb on our contentment
I filled you up with joy and happiness
Only to see you now filled with resentment
So foolish-
I was foolish to watch us explode
And I know i shattered my promises
And broke all commitments
But I swear I don't wanna mutilate your spirit.
This thing, this love between is trying to breathe
So we shall be together once again
Cause I know in my heart this love is a sure thing.
But when you feel my fruits are ripe
And I can commit to your being
I will untie my tubes
To give birth to hope in this partnership
This relationship cannot be defined
And I refuse to let miscommunication
And trust lead us to live unparalleled lives!
But right now,
Neither of us are ready to float on cloud nine.
True enough....
I am so in love with you
And never will I wanna be without you
A personality so contagious
So handsome, funny with high intelligence
A swagg so cool and a voice oh so smooth
Write music so slick
Lyrics so sharp,
Can kill a target
An assassin with perfect aim would miss
But seriously...
My world revolves around you
You are like,
Its nature and without you its not stable
Your heart is like a melody
My heart sings to
I mean I can go acapella
And you instrumental
But it sounds so much better together
And my heart cannot make music-
If it's not with you.
Words cannot express
Strong feelings I have compressed
See with you I'm at my best
You are where my love manifest
With simple words put...
I LOVE YOU
And no one else will ever do.


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-05-15 06:03 PM


Lovely longing~

Enjoyed your heartfelt thoughts here.

*welcome*

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