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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2011-05-13 11:49 AM




In Woods of Pine
By Elizabeth Santos
For Nancy Ness
Upon visiting her childhood home
In rural Massachusetts



Walls of stone through woods of pine
Marked the land that once was mine
Where violets spread across the lawn
And frogs croaked out from dusk til dawn

A house of shingles wood and brick
Amongst the trees ten acres thick
Was where a family lived its time
In cozy rooms of knotty pine

A little woodshop painted red
Still stands unnoticed by the shed
The hand tools of a skillful man
Felt comfort in his practiced hand

A due respect they still bestow
Each lined up neatly in a row
As if obediently in place
And undisturbed within its space

Through autumn wind and winter storm
A little woodstove kept him warm
And through the woodshop window pane
He saw the windy coast of Maine’

He lived in past and future days
But in the present misty haze
He whittled out of season’s time
A Swedish dream in woods of pine

Well worn by little booted feet
Were footpaths into woodlands deep
And gardens on a rocky slope
Both vestiges of strength and hope

And still the tools remain in place
And still the land retains its grace
The summer swamps that turn to ice
Still lace the fringe of paradise

He cared for this, his sacred lot
As though God granted him this plot
Knowing that his skillful art
Would etch these memories in my heart

[This message has been edited by Nan (05-15-2011 09:35 AM).]

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-05-13 12:08 PM


Absolutely beautiful.  I loved very word and drank in every image with exquisite contentment.

Owl

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2011-05-14 10:25 PM


Liz you always write the most beautiful poems! And, this is no exception. Nan will love it.
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-05-14 10:58 PM


I am flabbergasted. This is just a wonderful and sensitive (a word I don't use much) treatment of what we used to call "the old house." I can feel it and smell it and even touch it through your words. I'm happy to have been able to read this, it touched me very much.

~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~

Margherita
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4 posted 2011-05-15 05:36 AM


quote:
And still the tools remain in place
And still the land retains its grace
The summer swamps that turn to ice
Still lace the fringe of paradise



Refined poetry that touches the heart with its beauty. Nice that you grace Pip with your presence, dear Elizabeth.

Love,
Margherita

Nan
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5 posted 2011-05-15 09:18 AM


Lizzy, This is absolutely wonderful.  I can't thank you enough for your loving words.  While I'm away from my PC, I can't find another photo in my laptop to add to your poem.  I can add more when I get home.  Meanwhile, I'll send a link to my sister and brother so that they can enjoy it as much as I.

You are SUCH a great friend.  Love you, dear Lady..

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 2011-05-15 03:06 PM


Nan,
I love this snowy scene of your childhood home and I'm so happy that you liked the poem. This in a way is a response to that wonderful poem you wrote about Oak Spring, our little house in the woods. Thank you for sharing your long ago memories with me.
And to my poet friends, thank you for your kind words.
Liz

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2011-05-15 04:48 PM


So beautiful and touching. It brought tears to my eyes. A keeper for sure.
                                  Ida

Sunshine
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8 posted 2011-05-15 10:26 PM


Swedish? I didn't know you were a Swede, Nan! I would love to take this whole poem and put it in my boss' window because...behold, the Swede's of Lindsborg would LOVE it!

Let me know if I have your permission!

Lady Santos...you NEVER let us down! I knew I would enjoy this so much...I just didn't know I might be able to share it with yet another community!!!

So the question is - would BOTH of you agree to my sharing it with a Swedish community???

Love, K


ice
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9 posted 2011-05-16 06:05 AM


Sometimes in the process of writing poetry
I feel that the spirit hands of dead poets touch us.

I believe that Robert Frost was your spirit guide here..

He did well guiding your pen, the poem is very human, nature connected-beautiful, just as his were, and still are.

A very enjoyable read...thank you

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
10 posted 2011-05-16 10:03 AM


It so happens that Emily Dickenson and Robert Frost are my two favorite poets and I can't help but believe that his spirit walks these woods. I am warmed to know he was recognized  (a tribute to him)
and the answer is yes
Thank you sunshine
Liz

Nan
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11 posted 2011-05-16 01:13 PM


My ancestors are Carlson's and Anderson's - That makes me pretty much a Svenska for sure.  Grammie Anderson was actually Finnish, though.  That doesn't change me much, does it?  My family was actually among the original settlers of New Sweden, Maine - where my Dad was born (a couple of generations later).

Of course you have my permission, Karilea - though you really only need Liz's, as she wrote this gem..  Enjoy, and thanks for enjoying the read!

icebox
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12 posted 2011-05-16 03:18 PM


As always, well crafted and classy.
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