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Open Poetry #47

this is my life

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-12 09:40 PM

this is my life, my life
my life, not your life
you want to take
a hold of it
you'd love
to take
control
of it
but it's
my life
and for
better or
worse, i'll
fight for it for
it's my life and
if there's one thing
i've learned i know
you can take from me
most anything but you can't
take my soul away from me

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-12 09:48 PM

Intriguing style you have made of your direct and in your face poem. The woman's body (except the head) you carved out with words gives an added oomph to the piece in my opinion.

~ I think the freezer deserves a light as well. ~

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-05-12 10:12 PM

Powerful words, from a strong gal! Liked this and liked your design.

Dreamgal

AlCowie
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 92
London, UK

3 posted 2011-05-13 08:58 AM

Nice, I like!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-05-13 12:55 PM

Thanks so much, my friend. I appreciate your comments very much.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-05-13 01:04 PM

Thank you, Dreamgal. I'm honored by your wonderful remarks.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-05-13 01:12 PM

Thank you, AlCowie for reading and respondign to my poem. I'm glad you liked it.

Welcome to PIP! I hope you enjoy it here.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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