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i may not like you better
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i may not like you better |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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i may not like you better when i've come to know what's really going on inside your head for i know how easily paradise is lost when out of sight means all but forgotten i may not like you better when i've come to know the truth and i've lost my last appeal but still i will remember the moments of magic not to mention the gentleness of your touch There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Faith, even the ones who don't stick around leave fond memories to resurrect from time to time. I liked this. ~ I think the freezer deserves a light as well. ~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Good to have some thing to remind you with in a positive way. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear JerryPat-That's true. Glad you liked this one. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear EmmaRose-Thank you for your lovely comment.  Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the gentleness of your touch ... That is well worth even a memory, I think. Nicely woven thought, dear Faith. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This speaks to me, loud and clear. Enjoyed your thoughts, so so much!! |
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