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kingsangel
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0 posted 05-12-2011 03:07 PM       View Profile for kingsangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kingsangel


Had to go deaf
so that I could hear
talking in my sleep
makes it all the more clear

Remembering the ending
as it was written then
reflecting on the beginning
finding truth therein

guessing at the questions
knowing the answers never lie
he couldn't care enough
and she hardly tries

knowing without knowing
how I know
as the wicked keep
knowing
without being known ....

© Copyright 2011 Julie Ann Ferrer - All Rights Reserved
martiniat8
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since 06-21-2003
Posts 887
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republi


1 posted 05-12-2011 03:09 PM       View Profile for martiniat8   Email martiniat8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit martiniat8's Home Page   View IP for martiniat8

Astonishing! Epic

the last two stanzas blew me away
JerryPat2
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since 02-06-2011
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2 posted 05-12-2011 03:19 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Wicked stanza's making me grapple with my perception and settle back down and really read your verses. I absolutely love this style of writing.

~ I think the freezer deserves a light as well.  ~

kingsangel
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3 posted 05-12-2011 03:22 PM       View Profile for kingsangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kingsangel

Thank you to both of you....I don't writw very often but every once in a while something just comes to me...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 05-12-2011 07:30 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I decided to carefully choose the right
Welcome to Passions greeting card to tell
you that you're in the right place for
the times that you will write.

I know the devils of the world when it
comes to listening, and not listening,
and being able to listen when one can't hear...

this is a good poem. I hope you will choose
to write, and often, then share it with us.

Welcome to Passions!

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~*~
KRJ
faithmairee
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5 posted 05-12-2011 09:19 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

absolutely love this...well crafted!

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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since 03-19-2001
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6 posted 05-13-2011 12:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

kewl brew angel...you know I always require more.
kingsangel
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7 posted 07-31-2014 08:42 AM       View Profile for kingsangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kingsangel

Thank you and my apologies for waiting so long to reply....

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