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Anoo
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since 2011-01-23
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UK

0 posted 2011-05-11 09:00 AM



Smooth creamy skin on your hand,
Silk to the touch, almost;
The milky texture flows to the tips of your fingers,
inviting a tender caress,
When I lay my eyes on the skin that enfolds your hand,
a longing brews in me, to which I succumb;
to stroke the softness; to feel the warmth;
to press my lips and breathe in your skin;
to steel a whiff of you
with my breath.



© Copyright 2011 Anoopa Siriwardhana - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-05-11 09:26 AM


I like this....I also like being kissed on the hand(s) something not done much anymore these days. I think it is a special thing to do...don't stop!
Lori

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2011-05-11 10:47 AM


Hi Anoo, this is very sensual and touching (ibn both senses), what an original sensation to read your poem, thanks a lot

yann

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-05-11 11:20 AM


this is so romantic and beautifully written...i love the picture your words paint in my mind...great wonderful poem

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2011-05-15 10:55 PM


This is so romantic and so touching, if you will.

Wonderful poem!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2011-05-16 05:08 AM


Hands are so full of tender promises indeed and your romantic words do them justice.

Greatly enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2011-05-16 05:49 AM


Scent and touch...you have covered the subjects well..

enjoyed
ice

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2011-05-16 06:57 PM


Nice and sensual...James
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