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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-10 06:28 PM


i shall not meet your steady eyes
nor listen to your silent cries
love me, love me, love me, love me
or else i'll surely die

i've believed your eyes too many times
only to get disappointment in return
so i shall pass by quietly
lest i once again get burned


There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2011-05-10 11:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-05-11 08:29 AM


Been there did that...like I said before-You go girl! This one struck an old nerve.  Good write!

Lori

Anoo
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since 2011-01-23
Posts 55
UK
3 posted 2011-05-11 09:10 AM


Beautifully regretted. A familiar loving  feeling I found in your poem.
Best Wishes
Anoo

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-05-11 07:45 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful remarks.  I appreciate them so much.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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