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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-05-09 02:20 PM



Heartsleeve read
with glistening eyes
words that wound
themselves around
her heart and
fevered her flesh
She smiled between
the enchanted lines
designed to please her


LGR©5/9/11

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (05-11-2011 08:41 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-09 02:24 PM


Delightful, dear Lori, you made me feel the joy and pleasure experienced.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-05-09 02:30 PM


Quite a letter writer. I gave him some pointers, so I'm happy to see that he has at least learned something! heehee

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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3 posted 2011-05-09 02:45 PM


very nicely done...i enjoyed it as always, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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