Snappin' My Head With Her Finger

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Open Poetry #47

Snappin' My Head With Her Finger

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-05-08 12:31 PM

Snappin' My Head With Her Finger

Oh yeah
I am aware
that most
wouldn't wait
as long as I,
yet they don't know her
as well as I believe I do,
for if they did
they would understand
that I have good reasons,
reasons of want and need
and desire and love...
For example;
it was she
that taught me
how to love as a choice,
how to appreciate a woman,
how to desire a woman
how to love no matter what,
for words of love
will be tested and challenged
until you gain an understanding,
and come to the conclusion
that love can choose to live
inside a heart
irregardless of time,
location and circumstance.
I love you Suzie!

JamesLee
05May
2011

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2011-05-08 12:39 PM

Your title captivated, and your poem held my breath. I've been reading you more than replies can estimate--this one though--well, I'd say you've grown, but maybe it was me who had to grow into you.

Charming, mature and yet guileless.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2011-05-08 04:39 AM

I totally understand your poem James, sometimes a woman make your choices, thanks for the penetrating and excellent write.

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-05-08 09:05 AM

Glad somebody has figured it out . . . Hah!

~ I have never been in a situation where having money made it worse. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-05-08 12:21 PM

Your sensitiveness always strikes me, dear James.

This is lovely.

Love,
Margherita

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2011-05-08 06:18 PM

Suzie is blessed with such words of
worship.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-05-09 07:22 PM

she is a lucky lady that inspired this wonderful poem...nice work as always, James

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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