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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-05-07 09:55 AM


THE MOMENT OF THE LITTLE YELLOW FLOWER
7 May 2011

Walking through the comforting forest,
she picked up a tiny yellow flower,
and, gazing deep into its heart,
she heard it whisper its secrets to her
with trust and quiver-confidence.
She listened in awe and admiration -
and with quiet respect,
she laid it down, slow-carefully,
where she had found it,
pausing to dream
a little
before walking on,
wiser
and older.

Owl

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-07 12:04 PM


Wisdom and beauty shower us in many different ways. For those who see and listen with the heart, like you, such little miracles happen often.

You rendered the moment most beautifully, dear Owl.

Love,
Margherita  

Sunshine
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2 posted 2011-05-07 12:52 PM


We're on a sunny kick...
only yours is a




OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-05-07 01:14 PM


Yes, Margherita, they do.  Thank you for your warm compliments.

Thank you, Karilea.  Smiles.

Owl

EmmaRose
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4 posted 2011-05-07 05:52 PM


Listening to a flower there is much
that can be heard.
I am grateful that there are people like you, dear Owl, that do listen for the many that may not always hear.

Martie
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5 posted 2011-05-07 09:04 PM


Diana...Each small thing appreciated is a step forward on life's path.  This little yellow flower is one.  This poem speaks to my heart.
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2011-05-07 09:25 PM


an impression most fine!
OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-05-08 06:24 AM


Thank you, for hearing the heart of the poem, EmmaRose, and for your very kind words.

Thank you, Martie.  I know your strength and your ability to overcome difficulties, and I am very happy that this poem speaks to your heart.

Thank you, Bruce, for your kind words.

Owl

The Lady
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8 posted 2011-05-10 12:50 PM




your wisdom and respect shows clearly Diana
a tiny jewel of a poem


2islander2
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9 posted 2011-05-10 04:25 AM


Hi Owl, I think we haven't to know the message, little yellow flower is the message, thanks for the tender and precious poem,

yann

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-05-10 04:13 PM


Thank you, Kate, for seeing me as wise in this poem, but, especially for seeing me as respectful.

Thank you, Yann, for enjoying the poem.

Owl

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