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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-05-07 08:42 AM


Springtime and the melting have begun in the north. The water trickles down to streams. From streams it flows into creeks. The creeks take the overabundance of their water into the Mighty Mississippi River. Big Muddy will take what it can and disgorge it into the Gulf of Mexico.

the water up there
is swiftly flowing down south
where it will flood towns

That will be a blessed relief at last, that the water has somewhere to go that can hold it. Before that can happen, however, if this melting is anything like past history, there will be hell to pay along the way. As the rushing water rushes residents along the way pull out brand new sandbags trying to hold it back. Sandbagging hardly ever works. You wonder why they keep trying.

the flood water's here
man fighting the water back
no use, it's no use

As we celebrate a mass killer's demise in Pakistan it appears the river wants to celebrate too. With powerful currents, rippling brown water steals lives' livelihood. Crops just planted, cattle stranded because of different reason, all washed away by the rising water, if history can be trusted. It usually can if we but just heed it.

an omen o'er all
the river's ghosts of times past
chortles as they watch

In this hour of nature's might against puny man's to hold his own the Army Corps blew a big hole in a levee up there. Huh? Yeah, that's right, blew a hole so the water wouldn't rush into Cairo, Illinois. Folks on the downside to the hole are frantic that the muddy will get them instead. That's what I heard. Save one bunch of people, let the other sink or swim.

man against nature
with all his technology
and her awesomeness

Too early to tell. Water's on its way. We shall see. We shall see. Come on, do what you have to do and leave. We'll survive. Always have, always will. One curious thing. Why continue to build along the river when you know you have a pretty good chance of getting wiped out every five years or so? Probably the same reason folks build near an airport and bitch about the noise.

its up to her now
what's the river's gonna do
it won't be pretty



~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-07 09:32 AM


You have put great skill into this work, dear Jerry.

Water is indeed the giver of life, as well as the giver of death, but without it there would be simply nothing.

Men always choose to live next to the water for many reasons, and last but not least because of the sheer beauty of it.

Let's hope that the riverbed will result enough big, so that no dangerous spill will take place.

Love,
Margherita


JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-05-07 09:47 AM


I am on the same page with you here, Margherita. They are saying, even as far down as New Orleans there may be problems. Usually it doesn't do that here, at least not like further north. Just saw this morning Memphis is about to be flooded. Hope not.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-05-07 08:52 PM


Wow Jerry, cool write! You just write all kinds of different stuff  
Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-05-07 09:26 PM


Appreciate the compliment, Lori. That's the mark of a bored person, always looking for different things to do to spend the time. Haha!! Thanks again.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2011-05-07 10:08 PM


I thought of you, last week, as we crossed that bridge into the city.

I looked at that swollen river, and thought, I wonder if other people know that we who live by her, see her so seldom?

Then I thought, "the muddy Mississippi is actually muddy..."

like that was an epiphany.

Smile...and I did at that moment, and thought of you.

Enjoyed the thought you put into this, Jer.

Well done.

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-05-07 10:22 PM


Thanks for the brain relapse that gave thought of me as you motored into the place I will be on the ninth of next month. I'm meeting my son, Nick, who I haven't seen since he was in his bassinet. He is forty-two now.

Yes, indeed, the Big Muddy is that, and especially muddy when times are like they are.

You'd be surprised how often I think of you. Thanks for the read and comment.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

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