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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-05-06 11:06 AM


Some people fear clowns
Buried deep within
The sight of makeup
Causes them horror

Run from red noses
They are just obscene
Come from outer space
Or W. C. Fields

Look at those big shoes
Big enough to hold
More than feet in there
A clown's secret sin

That flower that squirts
Who really knows what
Steal your soul liquid
That's what he's about

He dances and grins
And thinks evil things
Deflowers virgins
In his corrupt mind

We who fear the clown
Write these words to warn
The most monstrous clown
John Wayne Gacy, sic

Now that I've told you
Beware of the clown
I have to go now
Put on my makeup

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-05-06 11:09 AM


Wicked Jerry, just plain wicked creepy.  Good job!
Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-05-06 12:02 PM


I know, Lori. Clowns have a vast arena of emotions to pull from. Thank you.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

dreamgal
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3 posted 2011-05-06 01:17 PM


What comes to my mind is the movie It, by Stephen King! You wrote a creepy one here Jerry, good job!

Dreamgal

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-05-06 02:09 PM


Yep, I saw that movie, read the book, back when I still read King. I'm starting to really like writing about dese clowns.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

dreamgal
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5 posted 2011-05-06 02:17 PM


ya you might be on to something here, maybe a book? Or give ole Stephen a call maybe you could collaborate lol.

Dreamgal

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-05-06 02:26 PM


Hah! That would be a trip, Dreamgal. Hahaha!!

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

twistedpup
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7 posted 2011-05-06 11:53 PM


i have a fear of clowns and this is just got added to my list of creepy yet entertaining reasons why. well done!

*hugs*

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-05-07 06:33 AM


lad to be of help, twistedpup, thanks.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

ice
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9 posted 2011-05-07 09:57 PM


Dang, J.P, this is scary stuff.
Think I'll put my 30-30 in the corner tonight, and if I hear my Lab growling, it will alert me that a clown might be lurking.
Just kidding..I like the poem, especially the ending.

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2011-05-07 10:28 PM


Thanks, Ice. I think I was trying for some Twilight Zone when I was doing that poem. By the way, unless that clown is out of Stephen King's, IT novel, you won't need that 30-30, the Lab will do just fine. My uncle had one of those rifles as I was growing up, and he could hit anything, anywhere. He was exceptionally good at hitting the bulls-eye or the eye out of a squirrel who just peeked around that tree for the last time.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

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