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dreamgal
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0 posted 2011-05-06 08:38 AM


I had a dream my sweet
sister.
You and i were hand
in hand skipping in
fields of flowers.
In  sundresses
made by mother, we
joyfully played
together.
The sunlight shined
on your golden locks.
And the precious sounds
of giggles echoed.
A beautiful dream
it was.
I am grateful...

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-05-06 08:40 AM


I am also grateful that you had such a lovely dream, Dreamgal. When we awake from such dreams we have a tendency to just feel good all over.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

dreamgal
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2 posted 2011-05-06 08:43 AM


Its an image in my mind i wont forget. Its like a visit from her that i'll treasure.
Thank you!  

Dreamgal

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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3 posted 2011-05-06 08:55 AM


Such tenderness in your words, dear Dreamgal. Skipping through flower fields ... so lovely, it must have been paradise

Very beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
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4 posted 2011-05-06 09:03 AM


It was Margherita, ill treasure it.
Thank you!

Dreamgal

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