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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-05-06 07:14 AM



I opened the door for her slowly
not that her limbs were better than nature
but they were longer in ascending
and heaven was somewhere just above
that gucci horizon she didn't mind

she wore my eyes better than most others
said she was comfortable in their boldness
could read my mind like a fortune cookie too
didn't take any longer she said
and she could always plan on the outcome

I played hard to get all the way around
to the driver side of her jaguar
then let myself seem easy getting in
as if I didn't mind being used this way
to help her with her decadent cravings

though they far exceeded just thirty one

_____________

daark  (scribblenote..short drive to baskin robbins..well there is a cigar bar next door)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-06 09:11 AM


Amazing ... just amazing how creatively you bask in the light of a unique inspiration... or was it the pleasant smoke-cloud of your cigar?

Either way the "outcome" is glistening.

Again, every line "ein Treffer" ... a hit!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-05-06 09:17 AM


ms mar, thank you lady for the glances
OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-05-06 03:43 PM


Much enjoyed, Dark, especially the middle stanza.

Owl

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-05-06 03:47 PM


Lady Owl...they have ice cream shops here...baskin robbins 31 flavors...needless to say it is a fun place to visit. thanks lady
OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-05-06 04:04 PM


How on earth did you know I was wondering about that?  Duh!  Blush, blush!  The lady hails from South Africa, and we don't have that here!  Wow!  It most certainly does sound a fun place to visit!

When I went to Greece in 1978, there was a shop in Athens, which was famous for its ice-cream flavours (I don't know how many they had, but there were lots!), and ohhhhhh, how delicious they were (well, the ones I tried), esPECially as Athens experienced the hottest heatwave in 50 years, the day that I went to that ice-cream shop!

Owl

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-05-06 04:10 PM


Lady Owl...I guess it was your wicked smile that gave away your curiosity...the heat does draw out the ice cream crowd
OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-05-06 04:16 PM


My wicked smile, eh?  Smiles (wicked ones!).

Owl

twistedpup
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8 posted 2011-05-06 11:49 PM


great poem, good read for a night that i cant sleep, thank you.

*hugs*

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-05-07 08:57 AM


glad to keep you up TP..thanks
Sunshine
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10 posted 2011-05-07 10:40 AM


You carve your curvesives so gracefully...

how can anyone not smile at you!?




Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-05-08 07:01 AM


ms sun...as long as you do...I am pleased...thanks babe
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