Splendor in the afternoon....

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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-05-05 05:53 PM

I whisper softly
in his ear. I smile
shyly and he understands.
So nervous, i grab the hem
of my dress and drap it over
my knee caps.

My heart is beating faster,
as i look into his eyes,
im intrigued by his
intentions, as his
delicate lips meet mine,
im swept away in all
the splendor.

Is this lust or is this
love?
Or does it matter for
I am blissfully aware
that this afternoon of
splendor is mine and
i delight in my
womanhood.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-05 07:19 PM

Splendor in the grass (remember that movie? Probably not) Or Splendor in the afternoon . . . Matters not . . . Matters not about love or lust . . . What really matters is splendor in the afternoon . . .

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-05-05 07:45 PM

I do remember that movie with natalie wood and warren beatty one of my fav's it was a tragic love story. The two of them so gorgeous!

Dreamgal

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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3 posted 2011-05-05 07:50 PM

I really should keep my feelings to myself.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-05-2011 08:24 PM).]

dreamgal
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4 posted 2011-05-05 07:58 PM

sad tale.

[This message has been edited by dreamgal (05-05-2011 10:15 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-05-05 08:27 PM

I wrote some stuff but I'll send it to you by email. / I forgot, can't send email. Oh well . . .

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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6 posted 2011-05-06 03:41 AM

Dear Dreamgal, you evoke a moment of deep emotion here and you do it beautifully. Mutual attraction is quite a wondrous, overwhelming feeling, why analyze it? Yes, what matters here is the splendor of your afternoon. How it will develop is not the question ... Who can think when lips tremble?

Love and joy.
Margherita

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

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7 posted 2011-05-06 07:47 AM

Thank you Margherita! As always your comments are kind, im glad u enjoyed.

Dreamgal

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

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8 posted 2011-05-06 01:16 PM

dreamgal - Love and Lust are the two foundational guests in the house of romance. When they knock, Lust rushes in and brings its own breath, its own heat and its own flame of fire. Love rushes in and waits for the detonation. And there we are in a house ablaze where we’d rather stay and burn up than leave with the firemen. I believe you've captured 'Splendor', even when it's in the afternoon. Whoa! Namyh

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

9 posted 2011-05-06 01:20 PM

Thank you Namyh, I appreciate your comments.

Dreamgal

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