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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2011-05-03 09:46 PM


Reflections

Trumpet swan
The sun sets on the still lake
The water trembles

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2011 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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1 posted 2011-05-03 10:22 PM


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Very very good

I always read you


John


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Sunshine
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2 posted 2011-05-03 10:24 PM



John is so right

and I must thank him
for getting to this
before I did...

Excellent piece, Juju...


Margherita
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3 posted 2011-05-04 02:34 AM


Your "Reflections" filled me to overflow, becoming the swan, the sun and the water ...

Extraordinarily beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2011-05-04 11:18 AM


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I was drawn back to this

It really takes great talent
to make time stand still


With your permission, I would like to
include this in my Word file of poems
by others


John


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dreamgal
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5 posted 2011-05-04 11:42 AM


This was very serene and very beautiful with so few words.

Dreamgal

Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2011-05-04 01:02 PM


John you have my permission

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

easy1
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7 posted 2011-05-04 02:06 PM


It is well-imaged. Aye, ripples never come back... except as you have recalled them here.
Honeybunch
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8 posted 2011-05-04 03:00 PM


Lovely, Juju!  Brought a sense of peace into my world.

Helen

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-05-05 06:20 PM


Very nice...James
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