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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Sometimes my words dont come out right, the way i want them too. Like a silly little girl writing elementary. But nonetheless there MY words and my thoughts. To the outside eye they dont do a thing but what does it matter, is ego more important? Sometimes its good to get some praise but in the end if the praise is all that matters then the words are not true. This is my truth. Wether good or bad. The only true opinion that matters is my own. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I never thought your words elementary, dreamgal, but on the other hand maybe elementary would be a good place for all of us to return to. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This, dear dreamgal, is probably something that we can all relate to. Somehow we are never totally satisfied with how we express our thoughts. It is important though to share our writings with others, interaction is enriching. There is always a message in what we write, for ourselves no doubt, but also for those who may read. And it is normal to feel glad when our message gets through and somehow touches others. When they communicate this to us through approval and positive comments or even through critics, it always means that we stirred their interest and that feels good. Regarding your thoughts about writing in an "elementary" style, I think that would be a quality to be proud of and I love Jerry's opinion about this. Essentiality is a goal to pursue. Write on and feel good in doing so, dear Dreamgal, I love to read you and I always enjoy your work and this one is no exception. Love, Margherita |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you Jerry as always your a good friend! And Margherita....oh Margherita Where do i start? You always have such a way of making me feel so good! Your wisdom is such a gift that you share with us here. Your comments are thoughtful always. Thank you!  Dreamgal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita stole my words. Teacher, I want them back! Make her give them back!  Elementary...maybe. From the heart? Positively! |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Awww Sunshine you brought sunshine to my day today thank you! Dreamgal |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hi dreamgal, I share those insecurities and hope that I never find myself writing for praise. I appreciate the honesty of your poetry, and don't get lost in how it can be improved. I don't want improvement - I want to see inside the writer. You share that with us. quote:I believe that it is easy to get lost in the praise and critique and lose our selves. I like your poetry and am glad that you have found your balance. Alison |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you so much Allison! Your comments mean alot. Although at times its nice to touch someones life in some small way with my writings, and i hope i do, i mainly do it because its my inner truth, and that means more in the end. I appreciate your support. Dreamgal |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You have touched my life. A |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
and you mine ((hugs)) Dreamgal |
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