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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-05-03 12:29 PM


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As night falls
With a crimson ocean—
Black seals


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-05-03 02:51 PM



Dawn breaking clean
Light sings song
Butterflies swoop


JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-05-03 05:21 PM


Thanks for the seals.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

ice
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3 posted 2011-05-03 09:05 PM


Excellent-Basho would be proud.
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2011-05-03 09:48 PM


This is very well done, I like it allot.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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