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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Yes I recall passion. It was You. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
 I'll bet you do!Lori |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...I always enjoy it when you say yes.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Christ.... was so passionate... Yes, I recall Him.  But I am pleased that you two read it in your own way. . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And He Instilled Passion In You. [This message has been edited by Alison (05-05-2011 10:50 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When the divine in us manifests, passion is sacred. YES! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ali, I can only hope so... Margherita... my dear friend, do you know how often I tell people that you were the first to take a chance on a first time novelist? |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Passion according to William Blake is "Mercy, Pity, Peace, and love" I believe that this poem encompasses all of those things...Stories told about Christ's spirit is a compaction of all of those things..and you have compacted it further. enjoyed |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Sunshine - Passion often waits at the brink of eruption for someone to ignite it or it waits at the brink of extinction for someone to resurrect it. I believe you captured both. And that'll put sunshine in anybody's day and make them say "Yes". Loved it. Namyh |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
How'd I miss this one? True passion never dies. As you have alluded to here. ~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..hello Sunshine..>>you used just the right number of words; very complete and striking ..>>spiros |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ms. K...Wonderful. So much said with so few words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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