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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-05-03 10:30 AM

you mentioned to the trees there
under brim of nectared dawn
how the sun strings bind you helpless
when they slip through limbs like threads
and swallow your wrists within

I heard your sigh songs to streams
when you were nearly nude of caution
and slipped the woman out of your lady
just long enough to saturate the wet
with your own shimmering solutions

you caught me looking at your shoulders
when you placed flowers in your hair
and moved it from over your charms
pulling it up and behind your mind
so your arms would be above your careful

we exchanged smiles like they were photos
we had both taken through minds eyes
and now we would pretend we were both helpless
to be anything other than what was seen
by the other when their eyes were closed

and our nights were the most lovely part of day

____________

daark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-05-03 11:01 AM

Deep, contented sigh...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-05-03 11:16 AM

thanks lady!!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-05-03 06:27 PM

Magical and exquisite! I wrapped myself in this and didn't want to come out.

Owl

Dawn Brink
Junior Member

since 2011-04-28

Posts 44
South Africa

4 posted 2011-05-03 06:44 PM

So beautiful! Well done!
" moved it from over your charms
pulling it up and behind your mind"
What words! Lovely

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-05-04 06:02 AM

Lady Owl...thank you lady friend

_________________

Dawn, thank you so much

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-05-05 01:13 AM

I think that I'll take this one to bed with me. It's a keeper for dreams for sure.

Ali-san

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2011-05-05 04:29 AM

Here, dear D., you have tapped into the well of universal beauty, conveying the deep emotion rising between two on the way to become one ... Even Solomon who wrote the Song of songs would congratulate himself with you if he got a chance to read this.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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