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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-05-03 10:06 AM



Looking out my window
into the dark
I see my own reflection
in the pane
gazing back at me
All I know
is that when I
look me in the eye
all that I can see
is lonely

LGRĀ©5/3/11


[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (05-03-2011 12:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2011-05-03 01:07 PM


Now what have you to be lonely about, my friend?




Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-05-03 01:42 PM


you make me feel so special I feel like I'm one of a kind...
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3 posted 2011-05-05 01:50 AM


... and you are one of a kind.  And you are our one of a kind and we love you.

Alison

Margherita
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4 posted 2011-05-05 04:20 AM


You render the feeling of loneliness very effectively, dear Lori.

May I invite you to look a little longer at your own reflection, beyond that illusionary moment of loneliness, watching closely until your divine self will reveal itself to you and make you aware of being one with All there is.

And ... you are loved.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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