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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
He died, he died, How do not to weep with joy, Millions of dreams are fulfillled, This man prevented me from inhaling And now Abbottabad is a holy city, I shall circle one thousand times this city, I shall kiss the ground of its streets, We inhale a purer air, The snake was crushed, The head was crushed Between the stone and the pestle, He died in his dreams, He died in his desert In his middle age, He died in his war dreams, Abbottabad is a holy city, How do not to weep with joy In the walls of my silence In the walls of my spring? On Sunday will remain sacred, On Sunday I walked Near Battery park On Sunday is a party of flowers We shall not see any more this vile snake Offend the world, Murder women The madman died, lives the madman Abbottabab is a holy city, I cried 10 years ago, I cried to have cried, I cry to have cried, But my tears today are pure tears, Angels dance on walls in jubilation On the high naked clouds. PS : hello everyone, I wrote this poem with emotion, but inside me, I will never be happy and rejoicing of the death of a man, whoever he is, but I was devasted by the past events and I guess many people deserve to be consoled with such a write, I regret in my heart to have to write such verses… |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm not unhappy the bastards is dead. I just doubt the report. Where are the pictures? Why buying him at sea so quickly, never mind Islam law? ~ Borrow money from pessimists -- they don't expect it back. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Another point of view to be respected. He was a vile, and evil man, a religious maniac, and needed to be subdued..though now he is a martyr. The world is no better off for his death, and yet we justify it- revenge is sweet, so they say. But his death to me is like a nuclear power plant..we build them (kill him) but don't know what to do with the waste, do not know the effects of what has been burned-nuclear fuel, or bin Laden's life. It is a very complicated situation, and your poem is a result of that. I enjoyed reading it-your skill of word use makes it clear and understandable. The emotional overtones in its content makes it all the more effective.. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, Thank you. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks everyone for the comments, I want to add that in my heart, noone deserves to die, whoever he is, muslim or other, may peace come in this world. yann |
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