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Flower Of Love

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Deep Blue
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0 posted 04-30-2011 06:59 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue   Email Deep Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue


        Flower Of Love


Beautiful flower, time is at your wait in spring
What joyful news do your flaming breasts bring
The rain shall descend from the heavenly skies
To kiss the ground where my love lies
Let your love shine on me, i have traveled far and wide
To behold the gem on your face and the fire in your eyes
Your spirit do i love let not my search be in vain
Smile a pretty smile for me and let me feel your joy again
The warmth of your touch, will soothe my soul
To think of one so mild, pure, beautiful and true
Upon the early wind make me warmer still
For the pleasure of looking at one as lovely as you
Into the evening as time lays its mantle by
Your beauty will illuminate the clear blue sky
And at night as twinkling stars appear up above
Pour out your soul in silent wonder,
O flower of love
And in the morning as you rise with the sun's first ray
You shall be called by your rightful name, Queen of may
Then let your flames engulf the changing of the wind
Beautiful flower, time is at your wait in spring
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Margherita
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1 posted 05-01-2011 02:28 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dear Deep Blue, this poem touches my heart with its beauty and depth. With such a gentle and intense invitation how could the flower of love not bloom?

Awesome write.

Love,
Margherita
2islander2
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2 posted 05-01-2011 04:49 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks deep blue for this flower I truly picked, this is graceful and essential, an enlightning work.

have a nice day

yann
Deep Blue
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3 posted 05-03-2011 04:32 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue   Email Deep Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue

Dear Margherita, your comment, coming from a great poet like you does me honor. Thankyou.

Flowers are beautiful to look at and i wait for their arrival every spring. In their spirit i see that love, that cries and longs to be loved.
Deep Blue
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4 posted 05-03-2011 04:37 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue   Email Deep Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue

Thanyou Yann, i am happy to see that this flower has enlightened your soul, may it continue to do so.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-05-2011 06:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wonderful flow of words...James
BluesSerenade
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6 posted 11-10-2011 05:26 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

A spring bouquet of words to decorate the fall.

Lovely poem~
Juju
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7 posted 11-12-2011 05:34 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

lovely

juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Earth Angel
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8 posted 11-12-2011 05:55 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earth Angel

Dear Deep Blue, you must be part flower yourself!!!


EA
JL
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9 posted 11-13-2011 12:35 AM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"The rain shall descend from the heavenly skies
To kiss the ground where my love lies
Let your love shine on me, i have traveled far and wide
To behold the gem on your face and the fire in your eyes"

Wonderful write, loved this verse, it has real pizzazz.

The title reminded me of San Francisco:
"If your going to San Francisco, be sure to ware a flower in your hair..."

Enjoyed.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
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10 posted 11-13-2011 12:41 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Like you as I read in your beautiful poem, I deeply understand the beauty of a flower.  

Owl
Deep Blue
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11 posted 04-30-2014 10:35 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue   Email Deep Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue

I did not realize that there were comments posted. Sorry for not responding. It may be several years since first posted, I would like to thank you all for your moving comments!

Anyhow its that time of year again, awaiting her arrival...Flower Of Love!
 
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