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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
As we walk away through shadows of grey of night and of a world of the moon We laugh at all we left behind we're not alone we're in the light Wondering where we went and how and how we'll get to where we go We've lost the light we left it behind we're grey, not white alone, we fight Passionate, but cold, callous, I don't give a damn we're grey And now we don't fight we're grey, all passion gone away we walk in ways of shadows of grey. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sadness and realism beautifully painted. What part of South Africa are you from? Honeybunch is also from South Africa. Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very passionate poem for a Very Passionate Forum. Welcome to PiP! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Thank you very much for the beautiful greeting, Sunshine! Owl, I'm from Johannesburg, but I'm studying in the Cape at the moment. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
welcome -Juju |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, thanks for that. I live in Durban. What are you studying? Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I liked this! Welcome to the Blue Buffet I think you'll like it here Lori |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I like this a lot, it makes me stop and remember a few things.  Welcome to PIP! Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Thanks for all the comments and welcome! I appreciate it. If you want to check out more of my poetry before I post again, look up my blog at twotimesaround.wordpress.com! Owl, as a proper Joburger, I love Durban! You may hate us for overcrowding your whole province in holiday season, but we appreciate the amazing weather |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Dawn, what an artful way to say things, we have to learn to be grey, it can take a lofe time but it is rewarding, thanks a lot for the delicious write. yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Dawn, anyone who loves Durban has my vote to be welcome! For a city (I prefer the bush) it is lovely, and I wouldn't be surprised if the weather (all year round)is the best in the world. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome Dawn, I so enjoy the South Africans here on PIP. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Ida |
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