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Open Poetry #47

Color of Envy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-04-28 01:15 PM

Her eyes were the color of envy
as she watched them
from the shadows
Their moonlit skin
unabashed under the stars
Urgency in their every move
Making moan sounds
that echoed in her throat
She slipped away
as they recovered
from their frolicking
She had to hurry
to get home
before he did

LGR©4/28/11

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-04-28 01:23 PM

Haha! Why, Lori? To get the .38 she has stashed away? Surprise ending. Love it.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-04-28 01:30 PM

Actually, I think she had something else on her mind ("I'll have what she's having")
Heaven help him if he refuses her advances.

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (04-28-2011 02:33 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-04-28 02:27 PM

Now, this made me recall
"The Night the Lights went out
in Georgia..."

go figure.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-04-28 02:59 PM

I can't win today.