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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2011-04-28 09:01 AM


I didn't know before but I survived it all,
the rise and falls, the twists and turns,
and the all invasive devastating
unrequited love.

But I acquired somewhere, sometime,
a large and solid pedestal
for eons now forgotten
at the bottom of my bag.

I think I'll take it out today;
won't you join me please
and raise a glass or two or three
to all survivors of this world?

That's good, yes, yes, it pays, you know,
to have pedestals in bags
for occasions good and grand
but mostly for the bad.

The trouble is a time or two
I've forgotten its existence
and there's simply no excuse  
for downright neglect.

I am today above the land,
a survivor on a pedestal
dressed casual on a rainy day
to be comfortable with me!

Helen / 28 April 2011


© Copyright 2011 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2011-04-28 09:20 AM


I have heard that pedestals are great for the view, but there is not much room to roam?

I imagine you with seat belts and a wicked grin...enjoyed you here lady

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
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2 posted 2011-04-28 09:31 AM


No, but who would want to roam?  Just want to stand and shout, "I survived, survived", watch the minions bow, take leave with a bow and then buckle up and get ready to ... fly!     Thanks for the read, Mr. Dark.

Helen

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-04-28 10:20 AM


Ahaa, I wanted to roam, Helen, very much so. I almost roamed myself to death, quite literally. I understand about the pedestal, however, and although I don't call mine by that name, I too have something I cling to, a reminder that II survived it all. I'll wait until my nighty-nighty glass of vino before I raise that glass, but I WILL raise it.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2011-04-28 12:29 PM


Don't forget now, Jerry!  Cheers!  There is, of course, no limit to the roaming as long as we stop every now and again to say, "I survived".  
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2011-04-30 03:00 AM


A toast to all of us survivors, Helen.
                                   Ida

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2011-04-30 03:14 AM


Giggles at your presentation, but solemn (and simultaneously joyous) congratulations at your positive, strong attitude and your survival, Helen!

Owl

Dawn Brink
Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44
South Africa
7 posted 2011-04-30 03:50 AM


Surviving... A toast to that!! Well done, in a world full of pain and heartstabs (but also love and beauty and joy), you survive! I loved this poem.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
8 posted 2011-04-30 03:55 AM


Thanks Ida and Diana.  My kind of pedestal is quite ... "uplifting" because once I've stood on it (and shouted silently) I know I'll stand on it again - after what's to come and provided, of course, that I remember that it's there.  Cheers!  

Helen

Honeybunch
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South Africa
9 posted 2011-04-30 04:02 AM


Thanks, Dawn. Well, one doesn't know what tomorrow will bring but so far I've survived a lot of (fill in a most un-ladylike word)and I'm celebrating - albeit it "above the land".

Helen

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
10 posted 2011-04-30 10:33 AM


You know your strength and the pedestal is just the symbol of "detachment" from things. You always ponder so beautifully, dear Helen!

This very moment I heard that Gheddafi threatens to "bring the war to Italy" ... I very much hope this craziness will stop befor further devastation... as you know I have wings that allow me to fly ... if I survive that is .... wheeew!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
11 posted 2011-04-30 10:50 AM


That's terrible news, Margherita.  I have sort of cut myself off from the news for fear of giving it more momentum with my attention but, oh, yes, I do hope sanity returns soon.  I suspect, however, that what is has to be for some grander and long-term purpose - beats me what it is though.  

And we both know that no matter what our essential selves will survive so ... see you in the air, wings and all.  

Love
Helen  

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