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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Leaden eyelids looking through my lashes a thought away from dissolving into a dream drift over to an adrenaline rush an eye opener that succumbs in seconds to lead eyeliner looking through my lashes leading me home LGR(C)4/25/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And 'twas a good thing for that sudden rush, Lori, sometimes we don't need to revisit things in dreams, too easy to turn into nightmares in broad daylight. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
No Kidding! Lately the drive home has been a real bugger...I try to suck down some caffene before I go... I hate it, it is very scary. Luckily there is little traffic on the highway and the little stretch of black top I take to get home. Thanks Jerry Lori |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, now, see...I've been enjoying my drive!  But I won't dare tell you how to make it better. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You won't tell me how to make it better? Thanks, consider the alternative. :p |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive, dear Lori. Be careful, it is a matter of fractions of seconds. I have experienced this too when driving home on summer evenings, when it is hot and one is tired ... Loud music and singing along will lift the heaviness a little I think. Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I play Stevie Ray Vaughn real loud, when I get "leaden" eyes while driving..that keeps me awake. I like the way your poem is arranged, Lori..compact, and visual. I enjoyed reading it. |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This was very good, lori i enjoyed. Dreamgal |
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