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EmmaRose
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0 posted 2011-04-27 08:31 PM



From the hours
of when we parted
the storm of purple
scatters pictures
on the ground

Petals, free
upon the sky
of night

Love collapses

the songbird
flies.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-29-2011 07:50 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2011-04-28 07:00 AM


ms er...enjoyed the stark warmth of this
Sunshine
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2 posted 2011-04-28 02:23 PM


Emma...

this is so sad...
and lovely.


Margherita
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3 posted 2011-04-29 11:07 AM


Dear EmmaRose, I love the atmosphere you created, I think this is just awesome.

Love,
Margherita


OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-04-29 11:08 AM


Beautiful and cinematographical, EmmaRose.

Owl

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5 posted 2011-05-02 12:51 PM


Yes, this is stark and beautifully expressed.

Alison

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