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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-04-27 11:13 AM



Needing you in more ways
Than I can fully comprehend
You are piece and part
Of all that I am
And who I choose to be
Your name is written on my heart
Indelibly


LGRĀ©4/27/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-04-27 11:20 AM


This is beautiful, Lori, and good that you realise it.

Owl

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2011-04-27 11:24 AM


Lovely, Lori.  Hope he knows how lucky he is.

Helen

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-04-27 11:41 AM


Thank you Owl for your wise comment
Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-04-27 11:43 AM


Helen, I think he has an idea (but I'm the lucky one)
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-04-27 12:05 PM


Don't know him, hardly know you, but I have a feeling both of you drew to an inside straight and won.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-04-27 12:54 PM


Good thing I won...I went all in on that hand.  Thanks Jerry
Lori

Sunshine
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7 posted 2011-04-28 01:09 PM


I try to respond before reading replies, but knowing that you have a penchant for playing cards just made me giggle at the responses...




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