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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-04-26 03:37 PM



APRIL SHOWER DELIGHT
26 April 2011

Leaving work today
in the pounding rain,
I wanted to laugh
and sing, and dance in it
all the way to my car
and open my mouth
and drink the drops
that would have tickled
my tongue
and take the hands
of the people
cowering from it
under shelters
or rushing through it
with bowed and covered heads
and pull them gently
into my dance
in the glorious rain . . .

but I didn’t . . .

however, I did walk through it,
unhurried, with my face bent upwards,
exhilarated by every cool raindrop
ignoring the stares of the sensible,
saddened at their loss.

Owl

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-04-26 04:15 PM


We would have had great fun together, for I am a rain lover too. Thank you for sharing your pleasure in such a captivating way.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-04-26 04:44 PM


Yes, we would, Margherita!  Thank you for your wonderful warm response and kind words!

Owl

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-04-26 05:16 PM


Hah! That sounds a lot like me, because I do that never mind the strange looks I get. Sometimes I wish I could just get nikkid and skip through the puddles, but even I have to draw the line somewhere.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-04-26 05:34 PM


Lol, Jerry, I am glad you draw the line at that!  Smiles.

Owl

latearrival
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5 posted 2011-04-27 01:54 AM


Love this.I also love the rain. We always used to put on bathing suits and go running into the rain dropsas children. I let my children do the same. Nothing more pleasant and fulfilling. Thanks for this one jo
OwlSA
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6 posted 2011-04-27 01:57 AM


Thank you Jo. It is lovely to pass down such a delightful tradition.  Smiles.

Owl

2islander2
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7 posted 2011-04-27 02:32 PM


Hi Diana, I really love this poem, here we hate rain because there is too much in automn and winter, I love the idea that rain is so rare that you love it and cherich it, this is most enjoyable,

yann

OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-04-27 02:47 PM


Thank you, Yann for your lovely comment.  Yes, South Africa is a much drier country than France, but Durban gets quite a bit more rain than some of the areas of South Africa.  We get most of our rain in the warm months so it is easier to enjoy the rain here than in many other countries.  However, even here, not everbody enjoys the rain.

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (04-27-2011 04:49 PM).]

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2011-04-27 10:54 PM


Rain always reminds me of my childhood in Oregon where it rains all the time and the springtime is beautiful beyond belief. When it rains I always forget my umbrella(on purpose)
                             Ida

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-04-28 10:49 AM


I love your reply, Ida.  Thank you.

Owl

steavenr
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11 posted 2011-04-28 10:49 PM


beautiful...brought back images of Gene Kelly swinging on that lamp post...very cool write
Dawn Brink
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12 posted 2011-04-29 01:36 AM


This is stunning! I love it and would completely be arms open, head raised in the rain with you!
OwlSA
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13 posted 2011-04-29 11:20 AM


Thank you, Steaven - "Sing-ing in the rain, I'm sing-ing in the rain - something something something something, I'm happy again"  yes, Steaven, that is exACTly the feeling I had.

Thank you Dawn, for your lovely comment!  I am happy that you love the rain as much as I do!  Of course, it is easier in South Africa than Alison's Alaska!

Owl

Margherita
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14 posted 2011-04-29 12:27 PM


I thought of you today and of this poem, dear Owl, because I have been blessed with heavy rain after gym while walking home. It was so strange, there was still sunshine, but it rained and I turned around and around again and again to find the rainbow which should have been somewhere I thought. Probably behind the buildings somewhere ....

Anyway I enjoyed it greatly, just took off the glasses. I was soaked to the bones when I arrived at home, but I had such fun.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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15 posted 2011-04-29 02:48 PM


Oh, how absolutely delightful, Margherita.  I am so glad you enjoyed the rain so much.  Thank you for thinking of me and my rain poem.

I don't know whether it is just a South Africanism or whether other people in other countries also do so, but here in South Africa, we call rain while the sun is shining, "a monkey's wedding."  I have no idea of the origin or the meaning of it, but I love the saying anyway!

Owl

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