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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2011-04-26 08:20 AM


If you could be anyone for 24hours - Who would you be?
-------

and you asked why?
Why would I choose
to be you, when
I could be anyone

You
who is abused
and neglected-
plagued with
sadness

I'd choose you because
You are exquisite
My darling friend.

I would bear your burden
feel your heartache
cry your tears-

just so you
wouldn't have to.



-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

© Copyright 2011 TrinaMarie73 - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2011-04-26 08:25 AM


Ohhhh, now this is a magnificent act of love, dear Trina.

You displayed your heart most poignantly.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-04-26 08:26 AM


Good to see you back, Trina. Everyone should have a guardian angel such as you painted here. Great poem.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
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3 posted 2011-04-26 08:40 AM


Great to see you Trina! This is compassion at its selfless best. Love your stuff!
Lori

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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4 posted 2011-04-27 06:31 AM


..sensitivity and good heart; a poem to truly
please the recipient..>>spiros

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
5 posted 2011-04-27 08:12 AM


Thanx Margherita! ^_^

Thanx Jerry!

Thanx Lori!

Thanx Spiros!

-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

Dawn Brink
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since 2011-04-28
Posts 44
South Africa
6 posted 2011-04-28 03:57 PM


Beautiful... Such is love!
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2011-04-28 04:03 PM


What a wonderful friend you are to your friend, Trina!  Lovely poem too.

Owl

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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8 posted 2011-04-28 08:20 PM


Thanx Dawn.

Thanx Owl.

-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

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9 posted 2011-05-01 01:31 AM


You have touched me, truly touched me.

xoxoox
Alison

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
10 posted 2011-05-01 04:52 AM


can we expect more, this is so moving, so touching..thank you for this jewel,

yann

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