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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-04-25 12:02 PM


THE SUBMISSION AT LAST
24 April 2011

He said that latter day painters
are rooted in the past,
interpret the present
and envision the future.

She said, “Say that again in the wind
in brushstrokes of your heart
in fingertip touch of the ether
in the scent of gardenias at dusk
in honey on your tongue
in words that sing the soul of the sun.”

He did and she melted into him.

Owl

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-04-25 01:05 PM


One who knows his art and stirs your own creativity most beautifully, dear Owl.

Very lovely process into sweet abandon.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2011-04-25 01:17 PM


lady Owl

You must be speaking of Demon Dean, the airbrush guru of Harley tin and low-rider chevy art.  nah...he is too thorny to be huggable I suspect.

Enjoyed you lady

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2011-04-25 01:24 PM


Thank you, Margherita for your sweet words.

Giggles, Dark!  Who knows?  Perhaps I could be!  More giggles and smiles. Thank you for peeping in.

Owl

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-04-27 06:12 PM


this is so superb...where can one begin with appropriate accolades?  one of my favorites of yours, to be sure
EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2011-04-27 08:34 PM


A most delicious piece of poetry to feast upon !!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2011-04-28 11:09 AM


Thank you, Steaven, for your stunning reply.

Thank you, EmmaRose, for your delightful response.

Owl

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