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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-04-25 10:54 AM


you said yes there had been others
those toms and dicks and harold
eugene breedlove named men

that came and went more often
than you wanted them to at the time
but in looking back through your mind

you realized they didn't take the time
to want to come back more
than the other kind of coming and going

and that your just using them as ladders
to help you get down into comfortable
was mostly the kind of love training

you needed to be new to this glue of me


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daark

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-04-25 12:10 PM


Dark, I think you could charm a stone into singing an aria!

Owl

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2 posted 2011-04-25 12:26 PM


lady Owl..

thanks lady friend..I think...lol

OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-04-25 12:33 PM


With regards to the "I think" (lol), I meant what I said in the nicest possible way!  Smiles.

Owl

Margherita
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4 posted 2011-04-25 12:46 PM


You are so unique in the way you see things and in the way you render them poetically.

Brilliantly creative you are, dear D., and a bringer of smiles.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-04-25 01:14 PM


lady Owl...I did take it as an "owl-posi"...was just tugging at your limbs with my reply.

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ms mar, thanks sweet lady for the reads and comments..you are a blessing.

OwlSA
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6 posted 2011-04-25 01:25 PM


Oh, so that is why my wing feathers are in disarray!  Smiles.

Owl

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7 posted 2011-04-25 06:35 PM


Harold Eugene Breedlove??  Ok then, that's rich D!!

You are too much, love ya like that!!

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-04-26 06:04 AM


babyblue....well he used his hoity toity name ...instead of harry...thanks babe
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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9 posted 2011-04-26 07:46 AM


"than the other kind of coming and going"

*grinning* that line just stands out. Enjoyed.

-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2011-04-26 07:48 AM


ms sinz...grin thank you
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11 posted 2011-04-30 08:48 PM


You write so damn well ... good ... gooder.  Heck if I know, I just know I like how you write.  Coming or going, I like it.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2011-05-01 06:53 AM


ms ali-san, you are cute coming and going, thanks babe
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