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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
In spite of the meteo forecasts And the charm of the presenters, Cloudy on Brittany, Rainy between my thighs, I had the feeling yesterday evening That the weather would be beautiful on my region, Yesterday evening I felt the friendship Of the good minister and the clouds, The air was fresh but affectionate, The sky also spoke as a friend And clouds did not seem worried, And then I know clouds, I see them since so for a long time, They do not choose their vacation It is the wind as a shepherd Which guides them under the blue stars. In spite of the meteo forecasts And the charm of the presenter, Cloudy on Brittany, Rainy between my thighs Today the sun stands at attention, I don’t mind telling you I am not disappointed, I like that we make a mistake When we plan depressions, The habit to believe clouds To confide in the sky which lasts to put the key in locks are better than a distant weather report. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Seems this tongue-in-cheek phraseology to the "meteo forecasts," yann, set very well with me. I particularly like the middle verse. Here's hoping you will have a good day. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I like that too, dear Yann. This is very cute and I know why you say "despite the charm of the presenters", as I have seen such French tv transmissions. They are unique, because of the incredible skill of the lovely ladies. They speak so quickly and they move with such grace ... who can concentrate on clouds I wonder? Is the last line incomplete, did you want to make a comparison? I am not sure. Anyway this is a most enjoyable write. Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed this very much Yann. Margherita, I think the comparison is already there. I think Yann was saying that it is sunny, despite a forecast of rain, and he prefers doing his own forecast by looking at his friend, the sky, rather than getting a secondhand weather report on TV - and that his forecast the previous day was right and the TV forecast was wrong! Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, now it's perfect. Enjoy the Easter Monday! Here the sun is playing with the wind hide and seek behind the clouds ... inside it is cold, so now I am going to play with my cat to warm up! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, as you said there could be confusion and I am glad you noticed I changed the enfding verse, Your comment is so kind and gracious, I love it, happy easter yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks diana, I think you read the poem after I made some change, and so Margherita and you didn't read the same last verse, this is quite confusing for the comments you did, but you were both right, I am happy you read and comment this poem with cleverness and accuracy, thanks a lot yann |
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