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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2011-04-23 05:47 AM


The price of oil and fuel goes up
yet love's value so diminished
and the warlords prosper more
than ere they've done before.

It's a world beset by trials
that suffer so the earth to burst
and the sea to vent its anger
indiscriminately.

And in amongst this spiral
the energy of you and I
comes in second to the norms
established by the unaware.

Not today, tomorrow, or
next week, next month, year
will energy en mass rise up ~
but energy is such to be
unseen, unheard, unknown,
until the most amazing shock
changes what we know.  

Wide awake, hair singed and burnt,
and who will care of oil and fuel
when the price of love has risen high
and our coffers empty, spent?

Helen / 23 April 2011


© Copyright 2011 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-04-23 09:29 AM


Whoa!!! Dynamite, Helen. What an in-your-face piece of work. You managed to parlay the insanity of the world to the unease of personal feeling between lovers. Not an easy task, but you have succeeded big time.

Yes.

~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2011-04-23 10:25 AM


Did I do all that, Jerry?     If I did then it had to be done.  Thanks so much for your comment.

Helen

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-04-23 12:24 PM


Yes, you did all that! And you did it in your special style I've come to enjoy so much. Bless your heart!
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2011-04-23 12:41 PM


Thank you so much, Lori.  Bless you too, dear one.

Helen

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2011-04-23 02:30 PM


Such a precious, effective write, dear Helen. A great reminder.

And to think that the energy of love is renewable endlessly ....

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2011-04-29 02:04 AM


Powerful statement about what is important and what is not, Helen.
                             Ida

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