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Open Poetry #47

Getting Carried Away

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-04-22 06:29 PM

Getting Carried Away

As my neighbor rolls over
she inquires as to how she looks,
I tell her fine,
I could even upgrade that to devine
should she require more words of affirmation;
as for my desire,
it comes but it goes
for everybody knows
the needs of a man
and a woman.
Whats that,
you want more lotion
rubbed upon your back,
that sun warmed back,
that soft silky back,
"There now, how does that feel?"
The softness of her skin,
the firmness of my touch,
I have to confess,
"I'm loving it so much."
Here I am getting carried away
on another sun fun day.

JamesLee
22April
2011

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-04-22 06:48 PM

What a delightful little ditty, especially nice upgrade James.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2011-04-23 03:59 AM

Enjoyed this, James, and certainly nothing wrong with getting carried away.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-04-23 04:28 AM

It can't get any better, dear James, and to imagine that all of this happens in Hawaii ...

Very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-04-24 10:51 AM

enjoyed it James, lovely words.

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2011-04-25 12:12 PM

Thank you Blues Serenade, Honeybunch, Margherita and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James

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