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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2011-04-22 10:58 AM





Your first memories
are of two heartbeats enmeshed
in sacred rhythms.

© Copyright 2011 Mark C. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2011-04-22 11:00 AM


Magical, sacred beginnings!

Awesome!

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-04-22 11:46 AM


Interesting. Positive. Insightful.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
3 posted 2011-04-22 02:34 PM


The trouble is that we generally don't remember those first memories - not consciously, that is, but I've no doubt that we do on a subconscious level. We feel it perhaps. Yes, magical!

Helen

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2011-04-22 02:48 PM


Wow, this is the sound of two hearts beating as one, and a profound and endless love.

Enjoyed your musings here.

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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Southeastern USA
5 posted 2011-04-22 06:29 PM


Thank you Margherita, JerryPat2, Honeybunch, and BluesSerenade for your kind comments.

It is perhaps at least a partial explanation why we as humans here are so affected by music and chant. Yet, as the title implies, all this must be taken with a grain of humor, as in:

"That sum*****, I'll never want to leave the womb again."
"Yeah, there's no lions and tigers and bears in there!"

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