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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2011-04-22 10:16 AM


          'Thief of Time'

If I was the ‘thief of time’
with all the sublime moments
of eternity at my command
my only and ever simple wish
  would be
to spend them all with you.

            --- b. e. adams (4/22/2011)



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OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-04-22 10:38 AM


I know she reads this, Bruce.

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-04-22 10:47 AM


what a lucky and lovely woman to have this written to/about her. Very romantic!
Lori

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2011-04-22 02:45 PM


The sublime moments are something to be desired, indeed.

Beautiful work, dreampoet~

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2011-04-22 02:58 PM


"sublime moments of eternity" - like that and your wish so beautifully expressed.

Helen

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2011-04-22 08:09 PM


This is beautiful, Bruce. This is why you are the site's master poet.
                             Ida

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-04-25 12:16 PM


Nice...James
Margherita
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7 posted 2011-04-25 04:04 AM


" ...sublime moments of eternity ..."

Ohhh .... Such a lovely wish, dear Bruce, so elegantly expressed.

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2011-04-25 03:06 PM


Oh, to have the power and the one to use it upon.

Certainly a wonderful write.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

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