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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2011-04-21 04:23 PM





She Who Goes

Through Life

Unmarked

Has Never Truly

Been Touched.


©2011 by icebox


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jwesley
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1 posted 2011-04-21 04:43 PM


Perfect!

j.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-04-21 05:49 PM


As we used to say back in the sixties . . . heavy.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-04-21 05:56 PM


Thank you very much!!
My scars are a little less obvious, more smoothed over when reading them in this light.

What a special gift this is~

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-04-23 03:00 PM


Probably you are right, dear Charly. Meaning by this kind of touch, the ability to be open to the touch even if it might be a risk.

I am glad I risked ...

Love,
Margherita

Skilerz
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since 2010-06-26
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5 posted 2011-04-23 03:28 PM


woahh, you're a genius. I'll never be able to write something like this. Within a few word, lies thousands of meaning. we can't grow up without pain,losing,failing and falling can we?
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-04-23 07:05 PM


Nice...James
Merlyn Hearn
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7 posted 2011-04-23 07:27 PM


Says so much, and well written.
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8 posted 2011-04-23 11:13 PM


This really made an impact upon me.  I am saving it, if I may.

A

Martie
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9 posted 2011-04-25 01:50 PM


True words, my friend.
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Saluting with misty eyes
10 posted 2011-04-25 02:54 PM


Wisdom and poetry all in one...

Truly as remarkable for its simplicity as it is for its words.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

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