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MorningStar
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0 posted 2011-04-19 09:43 PM


What's so wrong with showing it
What's so wrong with sad...

Perhaps I have no smile today
Perhaps I have no laugh
Take no joy in the simple things
But why is that so bad

Is it that my hurt,hurts you
And tears you up inside
Or is that it my pain mocks you
And threatens all your lies

I won't bury my feelings deep inside
Turn my tears to glass...
Keep my emotions from the light
And pray to God they pass

What so wrong with showing it
What's so wrong with that
What's so wrong with feeling it
What's so wrong with sad...



If I don't say it...who will?

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1 posted 2011-04-20 12:29 PM


Good point, good question. What's wrong with being honest to ourselves? Enjoyed your work.
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