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martiniat8
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0 posted 2011-04-19 03:29 AM


The scribe...
picks up the pen

looking at Act III
perplexities

again

perhaps needing to revisit it
again...

a careful cautious rewrite
perhaps
its not the end

but what to do with the actors on the stage
the players, the characters, the audience
"all in a rage"...
there is much happening, behind the curtain
and... off the stage

rage, perhaps...
is not the most perfect word
misinterpretation is a tricky bird

Anticipation

and let the day, most interestingly...
begin

[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (04-19-2011 06:17 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-04-19 08:57 AM


Good that I read this today, for I am getting ready to write a screenplay even as I write the novel it will be taken from. THAT should appear interesting.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2011-04-19 09:06 AM


Nice peek into your process. Enjoyed!
Lori

martiniat8
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3 posted 2011-04-19 06:16 PM


:-) Thanks for the comments... Ummm, I'm not writing a play or novel, this is my real life. :-) It will all be a book, movie or play someday, though...
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