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First Date |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I've waited for your open arms; I've felt your breath upon your smile; I've smelled the sweetness of perfume; This night has taken quite while. It's been so long I've felt this rush; Red lipsticked mouth and so soft skin; Dazzling dress with high-heels to dance; I can hardly breathe; the shape I'm in. I joined a dating club for fun; Something to do when I was bored; Oh, I never thought I would meet; Someone like you on this dance floor. I know we've just met, you and I; Is this what you call a real date? I don't believe it's come to this, I may be old, but you look great. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Absolutely LOVE the last line.....! Great piece my friend. LOL, j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ditto that twinkle toes! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi, jwesley, and many thanks . . . And twinkle-toes right back atcha, Lori. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Never stop dancing ...and dreaming, my friend. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dancing and dreaming / A good combination, Marcia. Thanks. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, James. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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