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Open Poetry #47

Until It Echoes No More

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2011-04-17 09:18 PM

Until It Echoes No More

Empty house
The dirty ceramic sink
Condensation drips

The wind howls
Wolves are jealous in the rain
River waters rise

Man stands still
The thumb of god presses down
Humbled tree bows down

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2011-04-17 11:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-04-18 06:35 AM

Excellent imagery, dear Juju.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2011-04-18 09:02 AM

Love it!!

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-04-19 09:03 AM

Love this!
Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2011-04-19 01:10 PM

very good, mysterious as well
I liked
EmmaRose

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

6 posted 2011-04-19 01:19 PM

Mysterious and elegant - a great combination.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2011-04-19 01:43 PM

This, all of it, is superb!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2011-04-25 12:34 PM

saw this about to fall off the page ... couldn't let that happen...

j.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

9 posted 2011-04-25 03:10 PM

Most assuredly a new direction from when I was reading all those years before. It is thoroughly enjoyed.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

Makeshift
New Member

since 2011-04-26

Posts 3

10 posted 2011-04-26 04:25 AM

I like it...a lot.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

11 posted 2011-04-26 07:41 AM

Wow. I like the feeling I get from this. Enjoyed.

-Trina
A weakened heart is far from innocent.

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