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ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2011-04-15 02:55 PM

  I was walking home from the
   library as wind brought me chills. I
   looked to the sky and saw how
   splended the clouds were decked
   within the sun's rays.
   Bringing vivid colors that
   could make a young lad
   blush. The sun was bright
   as an peach...with curiousity
   I reached out my hand
   and grabbed it. It was warm
   so I didn't get burned like
   my uncle told me I would, if I ever
   did such a thing. I sniffed it
   smelling it's sweet essence. My
   stomach growled, so I took a bite
   Don't worry it wasn't too big. It's texture
   was soft, but the taste was bitter
   at first. I could taste the sour,
   the heat from it's inner core. Some
   of it was tangy, some sweet.
  I tried to savory it, but couldn't.
   I wanted another bite,
   yet the sun escaped
   my grasp and leaped
   back to the sky sailing with
   the clouds east. Leaving me
   hungry for it's peachy glow.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-04-15 03:24 PM

I experienced exactly the same thing as you did here back in tha "sixties," Ken. In my case it was a real potent tab of acid that put me there.

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-04-15 03:26 PM

Okay. PiP messing with the comments again. I just commented and it isn't there. I'll try it again.

I had that exact same experience you have here back in tha "sixties," Ken. In my case it was a potent table of acid that did ti to me.

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-04-16 01:06 AM

Fascinating and delightful!

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-04-17 06:39 PM

Kind of sweet and sour, and still mouth watering just the same.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2011-04-22 06:20 PM

Enjoyed...James

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