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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-04-14 07:15 PM



Big brown eyes,
light tan fur,
a wet black nose.

You have a flat face,
so you snore, which is fine,
its become a comfort to me,
as you sleep by my feet.

Some times you have bad dreams,
so you kick your paws,
i awake and pet you until you're ok.

A family member for,
going on nine years,
a loving pal.

Charlie the pug.

*hugs*

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2011-04-15 10:21 AM


Can't believe this hasn't been hit yet!!

Nicely done...course I'd have to kick it off the bed, don't allow that, but can understand the feelings involved...

especially with a loving member of the family.

Well written, my friend.

j.

twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

2 posted 2011-04-15 05:46 PM


thank you

*hugs*

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