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Take Your Time With Me
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Take Your Time With Me |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Take your time with me Don’t skip over my complexity then fall into frustration with my complication of the common place thought Don’t get caught in black and white constraints when my thinking paints my reasoning in shades of gray and my words are easy to say but sometimes hard to understand Just take my hand and take your time you’ll see Your heart will understand me LGR©4/12/11 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Now this is a most insightful write! Well done, Lori! If only we were all attuned to the heart and the hands what a wonderful world this would be - no misunderstandings at all. Helen |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You alway bless me with your comments Helen thank you! Lori |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This was expressed beautifully, one of my favorites of yours for sure! Dreamgal |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you very much Dreamgal, I'm glad you like it. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
WoW! You make yourself out to be a difficult person to deal with. Are you? ~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
well...I don't think I am difficult except for those people that are very black and white thinkers because I am so gray.  Actually I think I'm very easy to get along with. Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well Lori gray it's a very nicely penned piece and I enjoyed it. Maybe you're not as gray as you think you are.....smile.... Eric |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh I am black and white... but in pixelated way ...that's why I'm gray Thanks for the read Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ya'll mean pixelated or pixilated, I remain respectfully confused. Eric |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...this is really great, Lori...i love it and understand where you're coming from There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Eric- I thought it was pixil but my spell check liked pixel so I that's what I went with. ___________________________________________ Faith- thank you ma'am glad you could relate Lori |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Lori Dear. The Daddygoose hangs on your words. and hugs Jaime |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice thoughts. ~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at you glow... especially now...  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"Take your time with me.." we all would like that, enjoyed, Ms. E |
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