sleeping along the midnight moon

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-04-13 07:17 AM

ÒGo to sleep little oneÓ
He whispered in her ear

They sat between the moon and the cabin

Her ring was adjacent to his palm
With her bangs
Flattering the wind

They could lose only their hearts
For their souls were sold to
The fate of the fire

It was stronger than her leather strapped jacket
For I walked too far not to see this
They were the fields of the west
Where the souls of the highway
Could see their eyes meet

Their hands once reasons of the past
Now became presents to one another

She was losing herself under his chin
Losing the smell of her perfume
To the shallow night
I think her hands might be his forever

I think her light skin
Might seem to cave his thoughts
Might begin to understand his reasoning
For why they sat amongst the towns bright lights

She might begin to see his eyes
Could fill her soul
Like a white stallion horse
Galloping as the wind set north

She might begin to sleep again
Forget her thoughts
As the days become nights
Her feet could tangle with his again

They could fall under the heart
Of their Sangria wine
Sip by sip
Until her hands clasped with his

Until the shadow of the moon
Bounced off their necks
With their lips locking between the midnight star.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-04-13 09:02 AM

What a gorgeous piece of poetry, i really enjoyed this.

Dreamgal

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2011-04-13 11:07 AM

Dream, I really appreciate that. Happy you enjoyed

Cheers

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2011-04-13 11:46 AM

A truly delightful read!

Helen

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-04-13 05:31 PM

a lovely write with this superb ending:

"Until the shadow of the moon
Bounced off their necks
With their lips locking between the midnight star."

...now that's fine writing!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2011-04-15 11:26 AM

Thanks, Helen. Happy you enjoyed. Take care

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2011-04-15 11:27 AM

Thanks, Steve..Happy you liked it. Have a great weekend

Cheers

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2011-04-15 03:59 PM

Lovely, Tomer, absolutely lovely.

Owl

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2011-04-17 07:00 PM

Owl, thanks so much.

Cheers

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