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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-04-12 04:55 PM



i delight in
days like today
when we are alone
alone together
together alone

i will look
back later on
days like today and
remember the joy
of being loved

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-04-12 05:32 PM


. . . and they will be good memories . . .

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-04-12 05:51 PM


Short and sweet and beautifully put. I enjoyed it very much!
Lori

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

3 posted 2011-04-13 12:52 PM


faithmairee - Joyous moments in time come with our hope they remain indelible imprints in our memory. I enjoyed this poetic work, almost like a prayer. Namyh  
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-04-13 05:04 PM


"alone together
together alone"

...you've captured the moment well...nice write

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