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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-04-11 02:22 PM


NEED KNOWS NO TIME
8 April 2011

Weird how dropping everything
for almost the entire day
(in busy working hours, no less)
scraping one’s meagre wisdom-box dry
and one’s heart cracked,
offering apparently effective
and gratefully received
support and possible solutions
to a colleague’s numerous personal problems
which were exploding all at once,
takes the edge off her various spiteful and hidden agendas
and jealousies and attempts at manipulation,
all based on insecurities.
Perhaps it is
the very poor cousin of
being forever responsible
for looking after somebody whose life one has saved.
That doesn't mean that I will no longer be on guard
against the hidden agendas, nor any of the other onslaughts, though.

Owl

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-04-11 07:37 PM


I know this poem!

And know it well.




OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-04-15 02:57 PM


I'm sorry to hear that, Karilea!  Smiles.

Owl

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2011-04-17 11:18 PM


Fine writing...James
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4 posted 2011-04-18 03:20 AM


I can relate to this and that last line is on target.
                      Ida

OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-04-18 10:56 AM


In one way, I am sorry to hear that, Ida, but in another, perhaps it is good to be able to be pre-warned.  Smiles.  Thanks for reading.

Owl

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6 posted 2011-04-18 12:26 PM


If more people cared and took the time to get out of themselves to aid another what a different world this would be.

Great write Diana. We do what we can when we can and that makes God smile.

Hugs,
Marcia


OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-04-18 03:17 PM


Thanks, Marcia for your wise and kind words.

Hugs
Owl

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8 posted 2011-04-18 09:54 PM


I always followed Fox's (X-Files) way of life:

Trust no one.

And it's hard because I really, really want to.

But it's better than opening up completely only to be used and abused.

Enjoyed your writing, made me think.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2011-04-19 08:49 AM


Owl-I read this when you first wrote it but didn't get a chance to comment then on what an insightful poem this is. I'm glad you put these feelings into words.  I know that for a gentle soul such as yourself that spite and hidden agendas etc. are alien to your nature and therefore extremely hard to tolerate. Bless your heart!
Lori

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-04-19 11:47 AM


Kaoru, yes I remember Fox, but wouldn’t have known who you were talking about if you hadn’t mentioned the X-files.  I enjoyed that series.  I wouldn’t particularly have remembered that he trusted no-one (perhaps because the last series we saw in South Africa was several years ago).  

The trick is, Kaoru, to develop one's ability to read people well and to know whom one can trust and whom not.  I get it wrong often, though, but not always.

I often tell myself to trust no-one, but my heart keeps forgetting it – and I must admit, I would rather be the one who trusts without cause, than the one who is trusted without cause.  Thus, I have often been the subject of an onslaught, but haven’t regretted all of the times I have trusted someone whom I should not have trusted – and in the words of Frank Sinatra, I have always managed to pick myself up, dust myself off and start all over again (this is another useful thing to teach oneself to be able to do).  Smiles. Thank you for reading, Kaoru.  I always read your poems and wish you posted more often.

Thank you Lori.  I must admit, I don’t like such onslaughts, and particularly feel hard done by and heavily resent injustice especially when it is involves behaviour to which I wouldn’t descend, myself – however, I am quite a tough old bird, and can be a lot nastier and a lot more sarcastic than you realise.  Just as one example (and there are many), somewhere in the Archives is a poem called My Parting Gift – if you do a search for that and read it, it will shock you to the core (although every word of it was warranted in my humble opinion) – I love your impression of me, but I just don’t want it under false pretences.  Thanks for your lovely comment, though.  I hope you are still talking to me after you read that poem.  Tentative smiles while ducking the rotten eggs and tomatoes!  Tentatively LOL!

Owl

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